If all is fair in love and war
Is your heart worth me fighting for?
Inside there lurks an innate fear
Of losing all that I hold dear
You say love is patient, love is kind
But if love turns its' back
Do I turn mine?
And keep track of things asinine?
A toast to love and all it brought!
A hound, a pound
A soundless thought,
It's all for naught,
Or so it seemed
Until one finds a love redeemed
Never have I felt this way
"I'm in love!" you start to say
Tempest subsides, clouds retract,
A new sun shines,
The rain refracts,
Chromatic tact,
But flaws mark this plan
Condensation, irritation
You're hurt again...
Just wrote that like 10 minutes ago. Definitely not finished. I didn't even edit it I'm just throwing it up here, so don't be too brutal.
"post"-post edit...
You're through you say
"that's it for me
I'm sick of Love's uncertainty"
I was rereading and that part seemed to come next. Ok, now that's it for now...I think.
1 comment:
Holy crap! You did that in 10 minutes?! It looks finished to me, but man, I'd love to read more.
I really really like this poem. Keep up the good work!! :D
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